Old is old when you reach an age of about 80 and are slowing down you start to slow down.
Eighty is old because most people at that age are in care homes most people need help with walking sometimes eating going to the washroom and even Help with getting out of bed.
If you are eighty or older you are old because you aren't as young and active as you used to be. Your muscles aren't strong as when you were sixty-five. You aren't able to go many places if you don't have the muscles.
Your if you need help with your lawn. Like hiring people to do yard work or just helping around your house. Some people need help keeping there house clean.
I think you are old when you are about eighty or so and can't do as much as when you were sixty-five or younger than that. I think you are old when you think you are old.
Carter I think that you did very well on detail.
ReplyDeleteI think you could work a little bit on better reasoning.
I agree with the muscles ceasing up and not being able to move much.
I disagree with the getting help around the house because most older people move into a nursing home if they can't do work.
But still very good job.
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ReplyDeletei think you did well on saying how they might need help like going to the bathroom ect.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you can work on is you could proof read your work after your done your.
One thing i agree on is that you might have to hire a person to mow your lawn because you might not be able to walk.
One thing i disagree with is that you said they could be unhealthy. They could still be healthy when they are 80.
You did well on that they wouldn't be as active cause there weak.
ReplyDeleteYou need to proof read your story before you post it next time.
One thing I agree with is that they might need help going to the bathroom, etc.
One thing i disagree with is that they probably wouldn't pay anyone they would probably just get there daughter or son to do it for them.
I like how you had lots of detail when you were explaining why 80 is old.
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on prof reading your How old is old.
I agree that you said that when you are 80 you are in a old folks home, because you can not take care of yourself.
One think i disagree with you is that you need help with your lawn when you are 80 because you can be healthy and get around easily and you would not need help with your lawn
One thing you didn't do the best was you made it all one big paragraph.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you did do well was you had detail in your story.
One thing i agree with is that 80 is old because they can barely move or do anything and they have to get taken care of sometimes.
One thing i disagree about is at 65 you still are not that strong as we are right now because they probably cant run in gym like we can.