What age do you become old at?
Every day you become older and older.
You will see when you get old you will have bad hearing and walk slower.
You will probably wont be getting out as much as you you,st to to do stuff.
When you get in your 70's you will probably move into a nursing home.
So you can have help with making your bed and talking baths.
When you are in your 80's you wont be going out side to do
stuff like playing sports. You will probably be staying in side and need help with walking and sitting
That is my story about how old is old.
One day we will all be old.
One thing i think you did well on was your spelling. One thing you need to work on is more detail and making your paragraphs longer. One thing i agree on is that they will need help in the nursing home, I agree with you on that because you will have week bones. One thing i don't agree with is when your old you won't be getting out as much, because there is the handy van that you can get out and around town in.
ReplyDeleteI like your beginning sentence. It makes me want to read more.
ReplyDeleteYou could put some more in to make it more interesting.
I agree that you would be slower. Lots of people 70 and older drive and walk slower.
I don't agree that you would be in a nursing home. Lots of people who are 70 still live in their own homes.