Thursday, November 25, 2010

How old is old

My old age is 103 because I knew some one that died at the age of 104.

One reason is that when you get old your hair will turn grey. Then you hair will turn white.

Another reason is lots of times when people get old they cannot walk probably. And they have toy use self moving devises like adult tricycles.

One more reason is that when people get old the begin to smoke.

So I think that the old age is 103 or 104. And that is it.

3 comments:

  1. i liked your sentences.
    i think you could work on your spelling.
    i agree that they would have to use mobile divices to move around.
    i do not agree that when they get old they start to smoke.

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  2. I like your reasoning for your explanations. I agree thet 103 is old. One thing you could work on is your spelling. I disagree that all old people smoke.

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  3. I like your sentenance they are really intresting to read
    I think that maybe you should work on your spelling
    I agree that 103 is a really old age
    I disagree that you will start to smoke when you are getting older

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